考研英语作文提分技巧 2020考研英语一作文模板范文参考

发布时间:2019-12-21 12:23:02   来源:[db:来源]   点击:
[db:简介]

  考研冲刺复习,任务重,压力大。我们要争取最后阶段多提积分。本文分享作文考场答题技巧,大家认真学习:

 一、审题、构思 所需时间:5~10分钟

  (一)图表作文

  1.结合主题,观察数据变化面对图表应当首先结合主题,观察图表数据变化,如果表格、柱形和曲线都比较复杂,则需先确定典型数据,如最高点、最低点以及骤升骤降的时间变化范围,在表格和座标图中精确地纵横对位,想象如何使用demonstrate a dramatic change, increase dramatically, declinesharply, go up steadily, remain on the decline这样的图表术语描述数据变化。

  2.掌握数据变化与主题间的联系想象这种变化和主题的必然联系,拓展思维确定出原因一二三来。如北京市民人均收入增加一定和近几年经济飞速发展、就业生存方式多样化和全面建设小康社会的国策相关联;沙尘暴次数猛增反映出中国西北土壤沙漠化、森林砍伐现象严重和城市房地产开发毁坏绿地植被的多元因素。

  3.收尾段落的思考针对第二段分析的原因提出合理建议,基本思路可遵循以下两点:政府指定法律法规扭转(推进)现有局面;个人树立某种意识主动参与解决问题。最后展望一下人类解决问题后的美好明天,一篇议论文的格局已了然于胸。

  (二)图画作文

  1.审题:通过图片信息列出可能会用到的重点词汇以2002年1月考题为例,图片中是一个美国女孩身着传统的中国少数民族服装,面带微笑。审题时果断列出可能用到的语汇如:traditional costume, ribbons, necklaces, earrings, majority group,sweet smile, charming features.没有这些词汇的罗列,第一自然段的描述过程将耗费很多时间。

  2.透过表象看本质,精确图片象征意义图画作文关键在于透过表面看实质,精确地点出图画的象征寓意,构思联想不到位会导致跑题或无话可说的尴尬局面。如前题的例子,要毫不犹豫地把图画和所定题目挂钩联想,并要以小见大把握象征意义,美国女孩代表着西方文化或西方人,传统中国少数民族服装则是个象征符号,代指典型的传统中国文化。女孩面带微笑正好传达出西方人接受或热爱中国文化、世界经济文化融合和中国文化走向世界的深刻意义。

  3.深入联想,进一步阐述联想的过程深入,很容易想到中国改革开放、加入世贸以及全球化(globalization)的国际大趋势。又可以联系到美国的jeans, rock music,Hollywood movies, MacDonald fast food等cultural symbols在世界的传播普及,进一步阐述“民族的就是世界的”这一命题。文章的收尾部分不妨参照考研作文模式提出两点建议:要保存珍惜传统民族文化; 对待西方文化要“取其精华,去其糟粕”,把优秀的文化发扬光大等等。缜密的逻辑构思足以使你表达出丰富的语言,展现出一个考研学生应有的理论素质。

  二、写作过程 所需时间:20~25分钟

  1.写出提纲规范内容有把握的同学可以立即动笔创作,把已定的思路充分表达出来。但思路还是不清楚、害怕跑题或无话可说的同学应把提纲丰富起来,如用汉语简单写出每段的三个方面,用简洁的词或符号代替即可,提纲具体化可以让自己沿着一个严谨的框架前行,避免天马行空、意识流主宰思维的危险。

  2.控制段落数字,尽量言简意赅200 词的作文不等于长篇大论,又有明确的提纲控制,考生必须做到言简意赅。达到字数要求不难,要看自己有限的语言是否言之有物,表达切题且有力度。对规模作出合理控制只需有以下的意识:3段式作文开篇段落引出话题,评价现状或描述图画图表,尽量用3-4句完成任务,其中设置一个长句,使得第一段达到50—60个单词。

  中间拓展段是论述主题并展现实力的黄金段落,要阐明图画图表寓意并且深刻分析原因背景,点出几个方面,结构有层次感,语言有闪光点和深度,写出7-8句比较合理,总字数控制到80-100字。

  结论段不止下结论,还要提出2-3点解决问题的建议。并且设置一个漂亮的结束句,使用排比、强调、倒装、虚拟句型体现句式变化,写出5-6句不算太多,总字数在70-80字左右。

  3.有爆发力的开篇优秀句型由于考研阅卷往往在写作第一段确定文章分数档次,最后一段往往被考官忽视,开篇的三句话要有爆发力,充分表现考生的语言水平和写作实力。因此要把平时积累的优秀句型应用到第一段开篇,如:It is universally acknowledged that……As is vividly depicted in thepicture, a lovely American girl is dressed in traditional Chinese costume…

  4.分层次表达的启承转合表达英语议论文写作讲究拓展阐述部分有段首句和支持段首句的若干论据。分层次表达又要避免数字排列的机械感,讲究启承转合的多样化表达,因此2、3两段就有可以依据的优秀表达模型。

  5.长短句合理搭配,磨练写作功力都是短句的作文略显水平稚嫩,写作功力尚需磨练,都是长句的作文又显得罗嗦冗赘,卖弄不成反倒做作。真正的优秀文章应做到长短句搭配合理,行文流畅,难简结合,曲径通幽,平实中见功力。大批考生缺乏写作训练,往往在作文中忽视运用长句。要试试在每段中设置出1个有特色的长句,如并列句、排比句、定语从句、状语从句等,使得文章流畅而不失难度。文章的结尾不好,苍白平淡,则给人虎头蛇尾的感觉,很有可能因为一句话而减弱前面的文采印象,所以要有意识安排一个闪光句型在结尾,让考官读到结尾时能眼睛一亮。如:Only in this way can laid-off workers completely shrug off povertyand regain their dignity in life.

  十大考研英语大作文模板

1.图画作文

  It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题), which is ______________(进一步的说明)。 He seems to be saying that_______________(给出细节)。 In my opinion, ___________(个人阐述)。

  This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体,如the whole of the human race)。 Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(问题所在)。 One the one hand, we must _________________(建议一)。 It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明)。 On the other hand, ________________(建议二) Only in this way can we___________(展望前景)。

2.图表作文

  The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(图表主题)。 The first thing we notice is that_______________(图表最大特点)。 This means that as __________, _________________(进一步说明)。

  We can see from the statistics given that _______________(图表细节一)。 After ving_________(细节一中的第一个变化), the _____Ved+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化)。 The figures also tells us that_________________________(图表细节二)。 (数据位置,如In the second column), we can see that ____________accounts for _______(进一步描述)。

  Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that___________(结论)。 The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that_____________(给出原因)。 / It is high time that we Ved(发出倡议)

 3.利弊型作文

  Recently the issue of whether or not______(讨论话题) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major arguments that can be made for_________. For one thing, __________can bring ____ to_____________(优点一)。 For another, it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________________________________(优点二)。

  But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________, among which are ____________(列举缺点)。 For instance, it can be __________to _____________(举例说明)。 In addition, many people find it ________(形容词)to _______________(第二个缺点)

  When asked to __________, I tend to ____________. This is because I _______________(原因一)。 Furthermore, _______________________(原因二)。 Finally, ______________(原因三)。

4.展望未来型

  The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones.

  First , __________________(影响一)。 More importantly, ________________(影响二)。 Hence, I believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ Nevertheless, I do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望)

  There are numerous reasons why ____, and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. The first is that the more(比较级)_____, the more (比较级)。 In addition, we all aGREe that________________________(第二个原因)

5.告示

  You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.

  Chinese-Speaking Contest

  January 19, 2008

  To improve students‘ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (26 January) at the Students‘ Auditorium. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.

  the Students‘ Union

  Department of Chinese Language and Literature

  6.职业道德

  the cartoons vividly depict people in expanding numbers are engaged in open and rampant cheating in business. In the first drawing, a boy has no courage to have dinner in front of delicious foods in that there may exist pesticide pollution or poisonous elements in the foods. In the second picture, the administrative office, salesmen, breeding families and forage shops are laughing at the hanging of a poisonous duck.

  Professional dishonesty has a very damaging effect. In the first place, since cheating in business reveals the moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness of those businessmen who engage in it, the dishonest practice will ultimately exerts a perverse influence on the whole society. In the second place, it not only puts honest businessmen at a competitive disadvantage, encouraging those who did not cheat to adopt similar practices later, but undermines the very foundation of professional ethics in business.

  It is often painful to impose sanctions in a specific case. But it is worthwhile. For one thing, to eliminate professional dishonesty thoroughly, serious forms of punishment for a willful offense—a suspension of the offender from business—should be applied. For another, since the incentives to engage in cheating in business are mainly due to a lack of adequate precautions, drastic actions should be taken to prevent one form of cheating or another.

7.投诉信

  Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting and has parties in the room.

  Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

  Dear Sir or Madam,

  I am writing to express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding accommodation. I would prefer to move into a single room next semester, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.

  I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate‘s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.

  To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve this situation/crack this hard nut, I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned. I am sure you will aGREe that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

 8.网络问题

  In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet. As is vividly depicted in the picture, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work‘s needs. Actually on-line visiting has become a routine activity in our everyday life. However, it seems rather ironic to use a chain instead of normal wire to connect with the mouse in this picture. The exaggerative and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet.

  Discussion on the duality has become very popular in newspapers or in people‘s chats. On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life. People from all walks of life are benefiting considerably from its powerful function of information communication. But on the other hand, a GREat many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle. Cyber-living resembles the experience of looking constantly into a kaleidoscope which displays both colored patterns and illusions. Such a waste of time inevitably leads to their failure in their life and work.

  Accordingly, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. For one thing, college students in expanding numbers get on line every day to learn the news, to study English by registering for web courses, to exchange information through e-mails with their net friends and to download their favorite music, FLASH, film and pictures. Being veteran on-line shoppers, they frequently purchase books, CDs at much lower prices. For another, once indulged in the fictitious world, people can barely concentrate on real life. Consequently, many students just chat on line or play computer games immoderately everyday, skipping many essential classes. After all, Internet is invented to enrich our life, to connect you and me, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.

9.环境问题

  the pictures symbolically illustrate pollution is becoming increasingly serious around the globe. In the first cartoon, a man is scorching the earth on a chimney. In the second one, a famous ancient Chinese poet, Wang Bo is astonished by the heavy smoke poured by chimneys into the air and dirty river polluted by a factory. We are informed that “the autumn river is the same color with the sky”。

  the drawer is sending a message about the significance of the need for everyone to fight against the danger of environmental pollution. There is no denying that the industry is indications of civilization, proGREss and development. Unfortunately, as industry develops, so will the number of factories, and the amount of industry pollutants. We are so development-oriented that we almost can sacrifice our blue sky and pure water in order to obtain a little material gain.

  As a consequence, it is imperative for us to take drastic actions. On the one hand, the factories should be equipped with devices which can dispose of waste gas and water so as to prevent them from polluting our planet. On the other hand, there should be an increasingly loud voice from the public for firm actions against poisonous gas sent off and unhealthy water polluted by factories.

 10.提纲式议论文

  Directions:

  A. Title: Air Travel

  B. Time limit: 40 minutes

  C. Word limit: about 200 words

  D. Your essay should be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

  E. Your essay should be based on the information given below.

  现在许多人愿意乘飞机旅行。随着我国民航事业的迅速发展,全国各大城市兴建了许多现代化的机场。乘飞机旅行有许多长处(方便、快捷、省时、舒适等);但是,空中旅行也有许多不足之处(机票价格贵,有的旅客不适应空中旅行,常常感到身体不适,甚至有人还担心发生空难)。请你简单阐述上述两个方面。最后请你说明你的看法。

  ( Composition for reference only )

  Many people prefer to travel by air. This is because air travel has some advantages. In the first place, airplane, the miracle created by man, is the fastest means of transport. It takes the least time for one to travel by air from one place to another. Secondly, traveling by air is convenient and comfortable. Friendly air hostesses are affectionate and considerate. They look after passengers all the way to their destinations. Moreover, on long distance flights there are films and music for people to entertain themselves.

  As a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides .” The same is true of air travel. It has some disadvantages, too. For one thing, air travel costs a GREat deal. The average Chinese are not rich enough to afford expensive air fares. So they prefer to take trains, which save a lot of money. For another, although passengers are assured of their safety, they are still worried about it during the journey because flying always involves more or less risk.

  As far I am concerned , the advantage mentioned above exceed the disadvantages. If I were given choice between traveling by train, I would certainly prefer the former. For me, time is money and it is the most important thing I have to take into consideration whatever I do. (216 words)

------分隔线----------------------------

浏览排行

周排行
月排行